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Title: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Jordai on April 15, 2013, 06:01:03 pm
(http://www.siglaunch.com/guild_header/dynamic_gen.php?guild_name=Inquisitor&font_type=MORPHEUS.TTF&font_size=45&font_color=FFFFFF)
<inquisitor> is the most successful guild on Vanillagaming. It is a fact that we are the longest surviving actively raiding guild on the server and have server first on most endgame content.

We have cleared all instances up to the available Naxxramas-Wing as the first on guild on this server. Our last content clear has been 3 weeks ago and because of that we are recruiting dedicated, reliable and active peoples for our raiding team. We are recruiting the following classes:

2 Hunters, 1 Mage, 2 Priests, 2 Paladins, and 1 Druid. All other classes should feel free to apply if you think you
have what it takes to be part of the most successful PVE guild this server has ever had.


How to be a part of <inquisitor>?

Write your application on inquisitor.guildlaunch.com (http://inquisitor.guildlaunch.com) and convince us that you are the right person for us!

If you'd like to know, find out more things, watch photos and videos of inquisitor feel free to visit and like our Facebook page:
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Inquisitor/168794493271911?fref=ts (http://www.facebook.com/pages/Inquisitor/168794493271911?fref=ts)


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Kamodil on April 15, 2013, 06:07:28 pm
Well-written I must say. GL =)


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Faszfej on April 15, 2013, 08:37:32 pm
I bump this for teh recruitz!


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Ridiculus on April 16, 2013, 03:35:43 am
Well-written I must say. GL =)

It is pretty well written except for some minor errors that stick out to a native English speaker such as myself. The second sentence: Get rid of the adverb and change it to just "active"

And you don't say "write your application." That phrase isn't used at all really. It sounds rather German :p You should just say "apply at."

Anyways good luck with recruitment.

EDIT: It's also common to say, "fill out an application." Any of those two suggestions. Just not "write"


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Aybara on April 16, 2013, 11:06:10 am
we are recruiting dedicated, reliable and active peoples for your raiding team.

You are recruiting for my raiding team? Why, ty!


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Ridiculus on April 16, 2013, 09:47:13 pm
Sure fix that mistake but not the others I pointed out. My brain will bleed.


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Jordai on April 18, 2013, 12:20:39 pm
Well-written I must say. GL =)

And you don't say "write your application." That phrase isn't used at all really. It sounds rather German :p You should just say "apply at."

Ridi, i really like to sound like German ;)


Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Swordy on April 18, 2013, 01:56:23 pm
Well-written I must say. GL =)

It is pretty well written except for some minor errors that stick out to a native English speaker such as myself. The second sentence: Get rid of the adverb and change it to just "active"

And you don't say "write your application." That phrase isn't used at all really. It sounds rather German :p You should just say "apply at."

Anyways good luck with recruitment.

EDIT: It's also common to say, "fill out an application." Any of those two suggestions. Just not "write"
English is silly.
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Title: Re: <inquisitor> is recruiting
Post by: Jordai on April 23, 2013, 02:16:10 pm
 /closed